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Khaos
If you have any bittorrent program, you can get this.

http://torrentspy.com/torrent/1194099/Hero...E23_First_Draft

This was uploaded sometime last night by a user that calls themselves "TKring." The script seems pretty fake to me, the writing isn't even that great. Many of the scenes have changed too. For instance, Ando ends up dying and the climax has a pretty different take on it.
Jester77
Seems like a fake to me sleep.gif
Aerdna
http://thepiratebay.org/tor/3704312/Heroes..._Official_Draft

I found this on 9thWonders, and apparently, this is the first draft of the finale. According to the member who posted this "discovery", these were the contents of the file:

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1. SYLAR actually IS very fast:
SYLAR
How about it? Can you do your
trick before I can do...
Hiro flinches and time FREEZES. Sylar's mouth is frozen in
mid sentence as Hiro smiles broadly and walks past Sylar
toward Ando. CLOSE on Sylar's eyes as they dart to the side.
SYLAR (CONT'D)
... mine?
Sylar furiously turns around and SWIPES the sword in a
diagonal thrust. It touches only air, but a huge gash
appears in Ando's chest. Ando, frozen in time, does not
react to it. Immediately after, Sylar thrusts out his other
hand and throws Hiro to the wall. Sylar is ******.
SYLAR (CONT'D)
Don't you get it yet!?
Hiro is MORTIFIED. Sylar takes a PAINTBRUSH from a table,
holds it above his head, then releases it. At first, it
seems that the brush is frozen in mid air.
SYLAR (CONT'D)
You can't stop time.
It is clear that the brush is slowly falling toward the
ground.
SYLAR (CONT'D)
You can only slow it down. That
trick won't work on me.

This leads to an exceptional fight at Kirby Plaza of multiple very fast Hiros, attacking Sylar who is parrying multiple sword-strikes per second.

A SECOND HIRO appears. A THIRD. A FOURTH. Sylar is now
dodging blows nearly quicker than the eye can see. Sylar
takes a SWORD from one of the Hiros and begins to BLOCK,
PARRY, and THRUST. His technique is poor, but his speed more
than makes up for it. Hiros are teleporting in and out in
random fashion. Sylar has a hard time keeping up.

In my opinion alot more believable than what we saw.
.............
Alot people wondered, why Candice told Micah she was huge, and anticipated her to move into that woman when dead.
Well, Tim Kring planned it the same way:

Suddenly, the image of Jessica MORPHS into Candice Wilmer,
but rather than the skinny and attractive brunette that we've
seen in previous episodes, she appears as a rather plain and
obese woman. The illusion of Micah also disappears. The
real Micah CALLS OUT from a LOCKED CLOSET.

....
A really nice fight between Sylar and Peter.
Niki throwing the parking pole, Sylar catching it with TK, trying to hit Peter, who catches it with Nikis strenght, hits Sylar with it, who then melts the pole and starts to freeze Peter. Claire arrives and Sylar grabs her, trying to cut open her head faster then she can heal. Peter unfreezes himself with nuclear fire. And so on.
.....
And for all who always wondered where the cheerleader saves the world:

Claire walks over to Peter and hugs him.
PETER
That's good... I'm happy.
Radioactive lightning bolts burst out of Peter and CRACKLE in
the night sky.
Peter kisses Claire on the forehead. The blinding light
fades, just enough to notice.
The radiation eats at Claire. Her skin turns dark and
cancerous. Perhaps realizing that this may be the last thing
she ever does, Claire reaches up and kisses Peter. They kiss
for a long time as Bennet watches on.
The glow slowly ebbs from Peter's body. Soon he returns to a
normal state. His eyes roll back into his head and he BLACKS
OUT onto the concrete.
FADE TO BLACK.
[...] later:
PETER (CONT'D)
So, what happened? What kept the
bomb from going off? I can't... I
can't remember anything.
Claire feigns ignorance.
CLAIRE
I, I don't know. Maybe we never
will...


In addition there are some nice parts cut out:


MOHINDER
So what?
BENNET
Molly was created for a very
specific purpose, and that's why
these people will stop at nothing
to find her.
MOHINDER
Created?!
Bennet is taken aback. He realizes he's said something he
shouldn't have.

......

A fighting scene between Nathan and Peter in the garage.

....

INT. PETRELLI RESIDENCE - 18 YEARS AGO
[...]
Charles motions to the two boys.
CHARLES
Look at them... Look at Peter.
Peter continues to slowly and meticulously looks for bugs.
CHARLES (CONT'D)
Patience, care. Every move he
makes is deliberate and calm. Now
watch Nathan.
Nathan squashes another bug.
CHARLES (CONT'D)
You understand?


.........
DL dies from the shot. Nicki now sees HIM in the mirror. And she also gets his phasing power. yeah! Whats up with that?
.......
And finally lets take a look at the end:


The orderly walks off as the doctor OPENS the morgue doors.
The six bodies lie in two rows of three. Sylar, DL, Parkman,
Nathan, and the Hiro twins. The doctor LOCKS the door behind
him.
DOCTOR
Well then.
The camera shows the doctor's face.
DOCTOR (CONT'D)
Let's get to work.

It's Linderman.
FADE OUT.

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I don't think my computer can read torrents so can someone make it a .pdf file or something just so I can see for myself?

What do you think about this?
Jester77
Aerdna the topic was already posted sleep.gif
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