This is an unfinished darft of the first part. Please tell me what you think.
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A young women stands on a deserted island, staring at a painting.
Several tears come into her eyes as she looks upon the painting of her rescuer
And a beloved sword protector.
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Hiro Nakamura tapped his fingers on the desk.
Why on Earth had he been teleported back to his fathers business.
He had the sword now; surely this should have returned his powers by now?
He turned to his faithful companion Ando.
“Ando, the sword. My powers are failing”
“Focus on your goal.” Ando replied.
“We need Petrelli.”
“What????”
Hiro scrunched up his face, pushed his glasses up with a single finger,
Then started to concentrate. “Here we go again,” thought Ando.
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Claire Bennett tore down the stairs. She was wearing baggy jeans and scruffy trainers.
Her blonde hair was in elaborate curls.
“Mom, I’m going to see Zach.”
Before she could her mum reply, her brother interrupted and whispered in her ear.
“I know what you can do freak.”
Within a flash, Claire stamped on his foot, causing a sharp cry from his mouth.
Mrs. Bennett came into the hallway with Mr. Muggles in her arms.
“What’s up? Are you okay sweetie?”
“Yes Mom, he just slipped down a couple of stairs. I’m off.”
And she ran out the front door.
“Claire?!?” Her mother called. “Remember your Dad wants to see you at four!”
“I don’t know why your bothering, Mom.” Claire’s brother said as he walked past.
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Hiro and Ando arrived in New York.
“I don’t know why you are visiting Peter. He will just say the same thing.”
Ando says grumpily.
“A hero’s duty is to protect those around him.”
“Whatever you say, Hiro.”
"We need to buy another comic book. Lets see Isaac the Painter.
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Meanwhile, Claude is teaching a reluctant Peter to focus on each of his powers.
“You need to focus on what’s important and state the purpose of each power.”
"Easier said than done."
"And I know what you said. Save the cheerleader, save the world. If you cant pull out your
Powers at random,
What’s going to happen if you mess up in a middle of a fight.”?
"What like with Lynderman or Sylar. Or perhaps Bennett"
"How do you know those people?"
"Just be patient and listen, otherwise I won’t talk."
*You listen to me. You wonder why I hole up with cages of homing pigeons, you really
Want to know why I prefer to be invisible? These people pop into your life, take what they
Want and leave you for dead. I should know it happened to me."
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A young women stands on a deserted island, staring at a painting.
Several tears come into her eyes as she looks upon the painting of her rescuer
And a beloved sword protector.
************************************************************************
Hiro Nakamura tapped his fingers on the desk.
Why on Earth had he been teleported back to his fathers business.
He had the sword now; surely this should have returned his powers by now?
He turned to his faithful companion Ando.
“Ando, the sword. My powers are failing”
“Focus on your goal.” Ando replied.
“We need Petrelli.”
“What????”
Hiro scrunched up his face, pushed his glasses up with a single finger,
Then started to concentrate. “Here we go again,” thought Ando.
************************************************************************
Claire Bennett tore down the stairs. She was wearing baggy jeans and scruffy trainers.
Her blonde hair was in elaborate curls.
“Mom, I’m going to see Zach.”
Before she could her mum reply, her brother interrupted and whispered in her ear.
“I know what you can do freak.”
Within a flash, Claire stamped on his foot, causing a sharp cry from his mouth.
Mrs. Bennett came into the hallway with Mr. Muggles in her arms.
“What’s up? Are you okay sweetie?”
“Yes Mom, he just slipped down a couple of stairs. I’m off.”
And she ran out the front door.
“Claire?!?” Her mother called. “Remember your Dad wants to see you at four!”
“I don’t know why your bothering, Mom.” Claire’s brother said as he walked past.
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Hiro and Ando arrived in New York.
“I don’t know why you are visiting Peter. He will just say the same thing.”
Ando says grumpily.
“A hero’s duty is to protect those around him.”
“Whatever you say, Hiro.”
"We need to buy another comic book. Lets see Isaac the Painter.
************************************************************************
Meanwhile, Claude is teaching a reluctant Peter to focus on each of his powers.
“You need to focus on what’s important and state the purpose of each power.”
"Easier said than done."
"And I know what you said. Save the cheerleader, save the world. If you cant pull out your
Powers at random,
What’s going to happen if you mess up in a middle of a fight.”?
"What like with Lynderman or Sylar. Or perhaps Bennett"
"How do you know those people?"
"Just be patient and listen, otherwise I won’t talk."
*You listen to me. You wonder why I hole up with cages of homing pigeons, you really
Want to know why I prefer to be invisible? These people pop into your life, take what they
Want and leave you for dead. I should know it happened to me."
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Thanx again!!!!!!!!!
