Hello everybody, (excuse my bad engligh )

I had dissapointed of the final fight of the last episode (1st season) I talked with other people that tell me they didn't liked it too. So i tryed to draw a comic with some things and some fighting I woulded liked to see.

Here I'm posting the first part. I will begin the second part soon.

You can read the comic following this link:
http://www.davidnavarrot.com/?p=190

You can clic on both sides of the page to turn the pages or You can use the cursors or the thumbnails.
I want to know too if someone has some problem to read it. Is too big? maybe people prefer a direct download with the pages? I just want that you are comfortable reading it.

HOPE YOU LIKE IT! I HAVE DRAWN THESE PAGES JUST FOR FUN AND FOR YOU!

ENJOY!!!!!!
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Excuse me about my bad english...

I moved this into the general area of the '...Your Visions' subforum since we don't have a fan art section for drawings and such.

This is amazing! Your artwork is incredible! I can't wait for the next installment! I definitely like your idea for the final scene of the season finale better than what actually happened, with the exception of Matt dying and eating his brain

Hey! don't spoiler my comic heheheh

Anyway, do you think here is better place than inside the fanfiction sub-forum? i'm agraid that people don't notice

It's not in the fan-fiction subforum, it's in the general discussion for '...Your Visions'. It's underneath the other subforums since there's really no other place to put it. I think people will notice it as long as it has the most recent post

Hey, the comic's amazing. You MUST continue drawing it.

Thankx! I'll do what i can but if i continue so busy...

Thank you again

Thats pretty cool but why does everyone like the brain eating theory? cant wait for part 2

that is really really awesome, you should make lots more. i actually prefered your version

wow.... that looks amazing, i really wish i could draw that well, anyway keep up the good work

good job waaaaw

You have AMAZING art potential. This peice is both intruiging and awesome.

It sort of reminds me of an anime "Elfen Lied" where a girl, who also happens to have Telekinesis (In the form of Vectors, a kind of invisible arm that comes from her body at the will of her mind) and uses it to destroy her enemies in dismemberment such as this.

If you haven't already seen it, you should watch it. Perhaps it will give you a few more poses for your amazing artwork. Congrats on getting such a response, also.

I'll try to read Elfen Lied thanks for your advice!

Now i'm sad to say i'm start to thinking i can't draw the second part because of my work. I'm too busy But maybe I could post the misni storyboards and the script and some pencils... Don't know!

Anyway, thankx a lot for all the people that readed it and spetially for those who commented it.

does the guy who drew this hate matt or what first he drew him incrediably fat second he made him out to be incrediably stupid then he cut his arms off for no apparent reason then killed him lol

Pretty good stuff bro. Its true, the whole Finale was very anticlimactic. I was expecting Hiro to atleast, Omnislash Slyar =P.

Your art is pretty good. You don't crowd up the panels, and the text bubbles are placed quite nicely as well. There's some inconsistencies in the story(Peter and Nikki had never met up till that point), but it is not too bad. A bit dark for my taste, but that's just preference.

I love it! I can't wait to find out what happens next

That's awesome!

wow.
fantastic O_O
my jaw dropped when i saw Parkman losing his arms

your style is great! i wish i had you skill someday... (brainzzz yummy xD)

Please continue it?

That was a fun read! I particularly enjoyed "the cavalry's here" (didn't we all feel that way? XD) and I really, really like your storytelling. Very professional!

Sylar's likeness was spot on, and I loved Matt too. I wasn't too wild about Peter, but I'm picky that way, so please ignore me.

Hello everybody! long time no see here. I had a very busy year since i post the first part of the comic. But i'm ready now to start with the second part of it. I'm sure it will be much better than the first one

Thankx to everyone, spetially to people that writed down some comments. I really appreciate it.
Hope i can post here my second part very soon.!!!!!!

I still dont know if would be better to post the whole second part or maybe post some pages every week. What do people prefer? please tell me.

See u soon